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The next thing you know, you're waking up in your own bed.  You blink a few times, still half asleep, when suddenly, you remember.  You sit bolt upright, looking around.  With the day you had yesterday, you feel as though something should be different.  Nothing is though.  'Could it have just been a dream?' You wonder.  Though the thought saddens you, because it is possible, even probable, that it didn't actually happen, you'll live.  It's not like you've never had a ridiculous crush before…  Sighing, you climb out of bed, getting changed out of your sweats and t-shirt and into a sweater and a pair of jeans.  When you're dressed and ready to go, you walk out into your hallway, grabbing your snow pants and winter coat.

Once you have on a scarf and hat, and gloves in hand as well, and you're about to walk out the door, your mom calls out from a different room, "Where are you going, [y/n]?"

"Just going to see Jamie.  I should be back before dark.  If not, I'll call, okay?"

"Alright hun, have a good time!  Say hello for me!"

"Bye Mom!  Love you lots!  See ya' later!"  You step outside into the cold, and trudge through the high drifts of snow.

'It sure got a lot deeper…' You think as you frequently get stuck in the thigh-high snow banks.  Finally, you make your way up to Jamie's front door, and ring the doorbell.  His mom answers, smiling brightly when she sees you.

"Hello there, [y/n].  What can I do for you?"

"I was wondering if Jamie is still home?"

"Still home?  The last time I saw him was yesterday when he went skating with you… I figured he was just sleeping over at your house again…"  Worry lights across her face, and flashes through your brain.  You pause, struggling to think of something that will ease her mind, and you blurt, "Oh, wait!  I forgot that he said he was going to visit some of his guy friends, since he hasn't seen them in a while… Silly me!"  You wink, laughing, but it's unconvincing.  Mrs. Bennett doesn't seem to notice, though, and lets out a relieved sigh.

"Alright, well, if you know what house he's at, I'm sure no one would mind if you stopped by.  Have a nice day, dear!"  You thank her and she closes the door softly as you walk away.  'Well, I'm screwed,' you think as you walk aimlessly down the street.  And that's when worst case scenarios start flashing through your head, giving you just enough time to register one before another dreadful thought replaces it.  

Lost.  Kidnapped.  Murdered.

You start clomping faster through the snow, stumbling and falling multiple times.  When you get to the forest, you scream, "Jamie!  Jamie, please come out!  Jamie!"  You get no response, and you continue floundering, and tripping and falling, the snow getting in your hair and soaking your mittens and hat, though you bounce back up and continue on.  Finally, exhausted from running as fast as you did all the way to the heart of the forest, you collapse into the powder, breathing hard.  In one final attempt to be able to help your friend, and even though he may just be a figment of your imagination, you shout a single time with a hoarse voice, "Jack!"  Moments later, most likely in a dream, a voice tinged with a hint of sadness softly says, "You sure do hate the cold, huh?"
Guys, I just thought I should warn you that the next 2 1/2 chapters (including this one) aren't going to be all that interesting, because they're leading up to some big events... And let me know if there are any mistakes, because I was really tired when I typed and edited this last night, and most likely messed up a lot ^^;

Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: You're already here, silly goose!
Part 6: [link]


The cover was made/edited by: :icon1roxas14:, I just added the title onto it :)
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:iconjeffyarts:
jeffyarts Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014
geesh! don't creep up on me like that. 
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Torliey Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
OH MY GROD
OH MY GROD
OH MY GROD!!!!!!!!!!
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Paismase Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I really do like Jack and all, but in this scenario.... I dunno, I think if this could happen and did happen, I'd probably have fallen for Jamie....
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CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, reader inserts can't be right all the time... Sorry ^^;
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Paismase Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Nah I like it.
Also, isit ironic at all that while reading this I am sick in bed with a cold, or is that just me...?
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^.^
That is pretty ironic! I hope you get better soon! :hug:
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:iconpaismase:
Paismase Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks.

I read the title of the story at first (Nipping at your nose), sneezed, and then thought to myself "That's for sure."
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IAmAnimeD Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"The the day you had yesterday.." At the top btw ^.^ really good btw!!!!
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CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Dolls! :iconstaredanceplz:
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IAmAnimeD Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ur welcome! Why the face
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No clue... I just lurv that icon... :shrug:
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IAmAnimeD Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD kk
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DarkMousyRulezAll Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OAO :iconsobeautifulplz: *swoon*
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CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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DarkMousyRulezAll Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD haha
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Back2BasicsandBeyond Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my god! please more the suspense is nibbling my nose!
see what i did there hehe
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, I see! :D
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
;v; Oh yes ... This is getting interesting...
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nuu, it's so boring right now :/ :nuu:
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
BUT I LOVE IT ANYWAY.
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
THANK YOU SO MUCH
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
..............:iconexplodeplz: THE SUSPENSE!!!!
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, don't explode! that can't be good for a person's health ;D
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha! True
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leonluver11 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hurry up with the next one! I love these! Can't wait for those'big events' xD
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you like them! :hug:
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:iconleonluver11:
leonluver11 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no i dont like them... I LOVE THEM!!! :D :D :D :D :D
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
A;LSJDF;ALS GIRL, YOU FLATTER ME :iconspazhugplz:
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:iconleonluver11:
leonluver11 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AWH YOUR RIGHT XD Keep going with the good writing :D
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'll try! :icontoothlesswasallplz:
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leonluver11 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D
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AmandaMoon Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, i luv it, but when jamie's mom says, still here? The last time... time is spelt wrong (no m, but thats okay). But i really like it and i only posted this because you asked... -sorry (i really love the chapters you have writen)
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for letting me know, I'll fix it right away! :hug:
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AmandaMoon Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, I really love how you wrote the story! :heart:
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CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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AnimeDragon10 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg these are soo good ! <3 luvv them xD
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! <3
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AnimeDragon10 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your very welcome ! ;D
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Deaththekid85 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
OMG I love this :heart:
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
a;ldfkja;l Thank you! :heart:
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Deaththekid85 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your welcome :D
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slycooper11 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So exited for the next!:D
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too! ... I'm still not quite sure what's happening in it, so it's practically a surprise for me too... ^^;
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slycooper11 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well that is fine :3 Take your time
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PinkIce98 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I just gotta say, I love you for making this. :iconletmehugyouplz:
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
N'awww, thank you! I love you for being so sweet! :iconaawplz:
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PrussianBabi Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
Too short, too short! :( Hurry, hurry :)
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Writer
y is it too short? wahhhhhhh</small Sigh. Where did little Jaime go?
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i didn't know what else to put in this chapter ^^;
I can't tell you that, it's a surprise! ;D
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
:O okay. haha
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